Usually, such things are said a few times, then do not need to be explicitly repeated until they undergo some form of change or are applied in different interesting ways. Every time someone calls her Bear-something, write something about her thinking she wishes they would call her by her name, and other derivatives of her bear identity. ![]() Every time MC steps outside, write an entire large paragraph about people staring at her weird bear outfit. This novel has dozens of these filler scenes that are repeated every chance there is. And that's just for one filler scene, over at least one hundred times. It might honestly amount to almost 10% of the novel. You might think it's not that bad, but you'd be surprised at how much of this novel is just this one scene alone, repeated over and over. Which one? You would surely ask, probably even without having to read the novel. Think for example of the scene where the MC is being thanked for something and she then japaneses out about how other people should be thanked instead and she didn't do much at all and decided to do it on her own anyway so she shouldn't be rewarded. Or writing the same interaction over an over. Easy to write content that requires no thinking about how characters with unique personalities interact with each others. What I refer to as filler in this case, is simply something that, true to the word, is only being written to fill in pages. So when I say that 80% of this novel is filler content, I certainly do not refer to the lack of combat scenes. I do not like the common meaning that people attribute to the word "filler", as that is usually used for content lacking in action and battle scenes, which to me are the most filler content there is. So what could be left to read about for dozens of hours in this novel? Chapters with different points of view clearly show the author's inability to have various characters with their own interesting thoughts, impressions, plans, etc. ![]() Other characters are not being thought of at all. The MC just goes around helping people and making cakes, bringing modern ideas, and showing OP powers. The author just cannot think of interesting events and characters. You could call it "relaxing", but I firmly believe that a relaxing story does not have to be uninteresting. This novel just has nothing going for it. There's a good chance you might have had enough of this novel by then anyway. However, everything before then is very well translated and edited. Be aware that the translation for chapter 290 onwards is complete tr*sh.
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